Doc: update 17.0 release date.

Also some trivial copy-editing.
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Tom Lane 2024-09-20 16:19:34 -04:00
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<formalpara>
<title>Release date:</title>
<para>2024-??-??, AS OF 2024-09-14</para>
<para>2024-09-26</para>
</formalpara>
<sect2 id="release-17-highlights">
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<listitem>
<para>
Various query performance improvements, including to sequential reads
Various query performance improvements, including for sequential reads
using streaming I/O, write throughput under high concurrency, and
searches over multiple values in a <link linkend="btree">btree</link>
index.
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<para>
<link
linkend="app-pgcreatesubscriber"><application>pg_createsubscriber</application></link>,
a utility that logical replicas from physical standbys
a utility that creates logical replicas from physical standbys
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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<para>
New client-side connection option, <link
linkend="libpq-connect-sslnegotiation"><literal>sslnegotiation=direct</literal></link>,
that allows direct TLS handshakes that avoids a round-trip negotation.
that performs a direct TLS handshake to avoid a round-trip negotiation.
</para>
</listitem>